James was never seen again after setting
off down the rutted, puddled road, foggy day
everyone’s worried, where he could be and why
was he upset or was he meeting anyone?
who the last one he saw and other clues
outside the window was a film of fog
some dark clouds were sprayed across the sky
James was never seen again after setting
will we ever see James again as we vent
our sorrow for all to add their concern
we searched everywhere but he was nowhere
off down the rutted, puddled road, foggy day
we sat around with our pot of tea and cake
can we handle this mess before winter comes?
we drove around villages after villages
everyone’s worried, where he could be and why
law enforcers were doing what they could
getting more frustrated as the days went by
and so we carried on looking for clues
was he upset or was he meeting anyone?*
(c) ladyleemanila 2016
* Cascade, a form created by Udit Bhatia, is all about receptiveness, but in a smooth cascading way like a waterfall. The poem does not have any rhyme scheme; therefore, the layout is simple. Say the first verse has three lines. Line one of verse one becomes the last line of verse two. To follow in suit, the second line of verse one becomes the last line of verse three. The third line of verse one now becomes the last line of verse four, the last stanza of the poem. See the structure example below:
a/b/c, d/e/A, f/g/B, h/i/C
To make the Cascade an even longer poem, use more lines in verse one. For example, if verse one has 6 lines, the poem must have seven stanzas so that each line of verse one is reused as a refrain in each following stanza (a cascading effect).
For: Finish off Fridays #2: James (25.11.16), Sunday Photo Fiction – November 27th 2016, Wordle 276 Nov 27 by Brenda Warren
18 responses to “Where was James?”
The repetition works well in this style and with the subject matter you chose for the prompt – I loved it. Well done!
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thanks, Jesse 🙂 glad you loved it!
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Excellent you played stuff the prompts to a very full extent! And in a poetic form.
I did continue my James’ story here:
From Peach to Plumb
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thanks, Jules 🙂 have a great day!
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Well crafted. Perhaps the form of a cascade seems better described as a whirlpool with the feeling it gives of progress through rotation.
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that’s a better definition, thanks, Colonialist 🙂
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The poem just cascaded beautifully. I loved it.
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cheers, Neel 🙂 glad you love it!
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What an interesting form . I may have to try one. Nicely done.
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thanks and Happy Monday! 🙂
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Lovely, as always, ladylee, a cascade of words and prompts that flow beautifully one to the next.
Thanks so for participating.
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cheers, Lorraine 🙂 my pleasure ❤
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He no doubt had his reasons. Beautifully written.
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thanks, Keith 🙂
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I think there is a kind of rhythm in the flow and the sense of the story unfolding
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thanks, Jae 🙂
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I like that. It flows well and reads well.
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thanks 🙂 have a lovely Sunday!
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