The life of Qorswyn and Qorra

ellen-datlow
Ellen Datlow

The life of Qorswyn and Qorra
Love started when they were both young
Up and down spiral as sung

Not settling and lots of drama
The list goes on and they both run
They met again and had some fun

In and out, what an enigma
He gave her a topaz mirror
Like a prayer has been answered

Trust was broken and there was trauma
And love was laced with betrayal
No choice but say farewell, hurtful

Who receives in the end karma?
Like a saint Qorra forgives him
But doesn’t forget the sad hymn*

(c) ladyleemanila 2017

* The Constanza, created by Connie Marcum Wong, consists of five or more 3-line stanzas. Each line has a set meter of eight syllables. The first lines of all the stanzas can be read successively as an independent poem, with the rest of the poem weaved in to express a deeper meaning. The first lines convey a theme written in monorhyme, while the second and third lines of each stanza rhyme together.

Rhyme scheme: a/b/b, a/c/c, a/d/d, a/e/e, a/f/f………etc.

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For: Writing Prompt #205 “Stories By 5”, Wordle 297 Apr 29 by brenda warren

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11 responses

  1. oldegg

    How benevolent Qorra was, unlike most women scorned; perhaps that topaz mirror was the real prize for her.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      perhaps, Oldegg, perhaps 🙂

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  2. purplepeninportland

    Love this form. You seamlessly wove all the words into a fine tapestry.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you kindly 🙂

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  3. Michael

    Lovely response Lady Lee..

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Michael 🙂

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  4. Jae Rose

    I love that topaz mirror

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Jae 🙂

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  5. mindlovemisery

    I am amazed at how beautifully you were able to connect all these prompts =)

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    1. ladyleemanila

      awwww thank you kindly, Yves 🙂 means a lot to me ❤

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      1. mindlovemisery

        Btw Mr Linky is up now I didn’t realize he was missing!

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