gifts

she wakes up late to face the world
on this nifty day, her clock is ticking
her bare feet flew merrily as she whirled
it’s going to be a great day, she sings with zing
in spite of all that beauty may disown
takes a shower, has a cherry for breakfast
someone rings, her voice skips on the phone
and pauses like a pencil, puts it down calmest
decides what dress, hat and shoes to wear
everything in her own pace and sequence
sits down and inserts a pin in her hair
and waits for some sort of suspense
outside she hears a knock on the door
the postman delivers letters and a white parcel
what can it be and who sends it, she’s unsure
and on this special day, too, she’s as baffle
a 24 carat gold chain from him
he remembered, she thought
large tears in her eyes brimmed
they shouldn’t have fought

For: Wrap it in Ribbons Please! by lillian in Poetics

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23 responses to “Wrap it in Ribbons Please!”

  1. It’s an amazing feeling to be remembered especially when everything isn’t okay between a two souls.

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    1. yes, it is! thanks, Jeren 🙂

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      1. No problem at all! 😀

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  2. sanaarizvi

    Beautiful!❤️

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    1. cheers, Sanaa ❤

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  3. Ahh, a sweet moment captured with such wonderful emotion!

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    1. many thanks, Jade 🙂

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  4. A very sweet and touching moment.

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    1. thank you, Björn 🙂

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  5. Sweet and hope all is well ~

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    1. I think so, thanks, Grace 🙂

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  6. Love these lines:
    “her voice skips on the phone
    and pauses like a pencil”

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    1. thank you 🙂

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  7. Love following this woman as she prepares for the day —- and receives her gift. All is forgiven — now that is the gift! 🙂

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    1. yes, lovely! thank you, Lilian 🙂

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  8. Making up is such a special time …

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    1. yes, it is! thanks, Beverly 🙂

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  9. aha…lovely!

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    1. thank you, Sumana 🙂

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  10. Beautiful! 🙂

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    1. many thanks 🙂

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  11. It’s a good poem

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    1. thank you 🙂

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