she wakes up late to face the world
on this nifty day, her clock is ticking
her bare feet flew merrily as she whirled
it’s going to be a great day, she sings with zing
in spite of all that beauty may disown
takes a shower, has a cherry for breakfast
someone rings, her voice skips on the phone
and pauses like a pencil, puts it down calmest
decides what dress, hat and shoes to wear
everything in her own pace and sequence
sits down and inserts a pin in her hair
and waits for some sort of suspense
outside she hears a knock on the door
the postman delivers letters and a white parcel
what can it be and who sends it, she’s unsure
and on this special day, too, she’s as baffle
a 24 carat gold chain from him
he remembered, she thought
large tears in her eyes brimmed
they shouldn’t have fought
23 responses to “Wrap it in Ribbons Please!”
It’s an amazing feeling to be remembered especially when everything isn’t okay between a two souls.
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yes, it is! thanks, Jeren 🙂
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No problem at all! 😀
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Beautiful!❤️
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cheers, Sanaa ❤
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Ahh, a sweet moment captured with such wonderful emotion!
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many thanks, Jade 🙂
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A very sweet and touching moment.
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thank you, Björn 🙂
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Sweet and hope all is well ~
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I think so, thanks, Grace 🙂
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Love these lines:
“her voice skips on the phone
and pauses like a pencil”
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thank you 🙂
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Love following this woman as she prepares for the day —- and receives her gift. All is forgiven — now that is the gift! 🙂
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yes, lovely! thank you, Lilian 🙂
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Making up is such a special time …
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yes, it is! thanks, Beverly 🙂
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aha…lovely!
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thank you, Sumana 🙂
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Beautiful! 🙂
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many thanks 🙂
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It’s a good poem
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thank you 🙂
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