There was a single lady who was drunk
In a blink of an eye she turned to bear
Fear lashed her to frenzy, she’s got no spunk
With sheer force, she snatched a tattered armchair
She spun around and dust was all over
Like she was rooting for something out there
She wanted that things remained as they were
She was happy drinking with all her friends
But then everything turned to be a blur
As a bear, what could she do to make mends?
Could she curve her drinking and be good girl?
Perhaps she amends and start all these trends?
She promised to be good with a sly twirl
Doesn’t want to be a bear forever
Be a lady and time to meet her earl
She has time to think about her future
Could be wonderful and living with flair
As long as the situation can alter
And so the lady waited for some time
As she was and be part of paradigm
There was a single lady who was drunk
Fear lashed her to frenzy, she’s got no spunk*
(c) ladyleemanila 2017
* The Lauranelle, created by Laura Lamarca, is a hybrid (variation) of both the Villanelle and the Terzanelle forms. The poem is 22 lines in length opposed to the 19-line length of the aforementioned classical forms. Lines MUST be 10 syllables in length and also MUST be in iambic pentameter.
Rhyme scheme is as follows: aba bcb cdc ded efe fbf ggA(1)A(2)
Lines 1 and 3 MUST be repeated at Lines 21 and 22.
Poems can either be formatted in stanzas or as a whole piece without line-spacing.
For: Writing Prompt #213 “It’s All in the Title”, Wordle 305 Jun 24 by brenda warren
8 responses to “The Girl Who Became a Bear”
I haven’t been by in a while. I still learn so much about poetics and poetry from your responses to the prompts. Interesting interpretation of the title.
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thank you, Lorraine 🙂
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Yes a clever poem – well written
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many thanks, Jae 🙂
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Villanelle I know and it is a struggle. Terzanelle I don’t – I’ll look it up. You did a good job with this difficult form.
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thank you, Debi 🙂
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I really like this, LadyLee
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glad you like this, Robbie 🙂
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