Our own lady and the dragon

© A Mixed Bag 2011
© A Mixed Bag 2011

Our own lady and the dragon
They’re curved in stone in our village
Protecting our tribe from the quake
Keep us away from the edges

We expect the unexpected
Our own lady and the dragon
And sometimes I give them a wave
Unlike any other stranger

Digging and planting seeds in holes
Got our own traditions to share
Our own lady and the dragon
In our little village they stand

The swallows and martins flying
Dogs run and bark, cats whimpering
Children ride their bikes on their way
Our own lady and the dragon*

(c) ladyleemanila 2017

* A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It is similar to the Kyrielle and the Retourne. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme.

line 1
line 2
line 3
line 4

line 5
line 6 (line 1)
line 7
line 8

line 9
line 10
line 11 (line 1)
line 12

line 13
line 14
line 15
line 16 (line 1)

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For: Sunday Photo Fiction – July 2nd 2017, Wordle 306 Jul 1 by brenda warren

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14 responses

  1. Sunday Fiction

    Another wonderful poem. I do like the submissions you give. They are always unique. Thank you.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      you’re welcome 🙂

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  2. athling2001

    Nice take. I have great respect for anybody who can focus their work down to the syllable and line.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      wow, cheers, Athling 🙂 have a great day ❤

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  3. Jae Rose

    She sounds like a wonderful guardian – I love both image and words

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    1. ladyleemanila

      glad you love them, Jae 🙂

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  4. J.A. Prentice

    You use the Quartern form brilliantly. Nicely done.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, J.A. 🙂

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  5. ladyleemanila

    thank you, Keith 🙂 I like your going, going gone 😀

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  6. Keith’s Ramblings

    Delightfully different.

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  7. jillys2016

    Lovely form, your words worked with it beautifully! I enjoyed how you used the word ‘swallow.’

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Jillys 🙂

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  8. oldegg

    Interesting story within a well written Quartern (Quartrain x 4). It was probably very satisfying to write it I expect.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thanks, Oldegg 🙂 yes, it was very satisfying to write it!

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