Pick up one of the stars
Shimmering rhythm
Caravan of memoirs
Like sheet full of crumbs
Shimmering rhythm
Like a prophet I stand
Like a foolish chum
Vent my faith in hand
Caravan of memoirs
Plumed myself of hope
In space one adores
I’m sure we can cope
Like sheet full of crumbs
I am just a small dot
With all the atoms
Wish we’d have a shot*
(c) ladyleemanila 2017
* Created by C. G. V. Lewis, the Quadrilew is a form of quatrain poem with an abab rhyming scheme, repeating lines, and contains an alternating syllable structure.
In the first verse, the poet may either start with a five or six syllable line. If the choice is five then the ‘sounding’ syllable count is (and opposite if the count is six):
VERSE ONE,
Line 1, 5 syllables.
Line 2, 6 syllables.
Line 3, 5 syllables.
Line 4, 6 syllables.
VERSE TWO,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 2 of the FIRST verse) has 6 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 5 syllables
Line 3 new line of 6 syllables
Line 4 new line of 5 syllables.
VERSE THREE,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 3 of the first verse) has 5 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 6 syllables.
Line 3 new line of 5 syllables.
Line 4 new line of 6 syllables.
VERSE FOUR,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 4 of the first verse) has 6 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 5 syllables.
Line 3 new line of 6 syllables.
Line 4 new line of 5 syllables.
If the first line of verse one has 6 syllables then the pattern is
Verse 1, 6565,
Verse 2, 5656,
Verse 3, 6565,
Verse 4 5656: (the rhyme pattern still being abab.)
For: Saturday’s Mix–08 July 2017, Wordle 307 Jul 8 by brenda warren
A magical write..well done
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thank you, Jae 🙂
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A nice blend of prompts. This does have a magical, anything is possible feel.
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thank you, Debi 🙂
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Very well done ladylee! It runs smooth and easy! Something new here to try out laler for Hank!
Hank
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cheers, Hank 🙂 have a great week!
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