© Mike Vore
The house is in need of repair
As you can see, it’s old and damp
With storm coming it needs revamp
Like skin, it needs cream and care
I don’t wish to be the object of scorn
But when one digs deeply
A mask covering the face
A poet and his paper
A house is the setting
Of a beautiful tale
So we started going to camp
And we saw this big bear
We’re so scared we swear
Ran away and started to decamp
Back to the old house
Got some paints and ladder
He started at the bottom
I painted the top floor
We sang as we worked
Glad the day was sunny
Bahay kubo kahit munti
Ang halaman doon, sari-sari*
(c) ladyleemanila 2017
* The La’libertas, a 22-line (4/6/4/6/2) poetic form created by Laura Lamarca. The stanza rules are as follows:
Stanza 1 – rhyme scheme ABBA, 8 syllables per line.
Stanza 2 – Free verse, 6 lines ONLY
Stanza 3 – Rhyme scheme BAAB, 8 syllables per line.
Stanza 4 – Free verse, 6 lines ONLY
Couplet – Italian (Any language acceptable except)
How the La’libertas for got its name is from the word “libertas” which is Latin for “liberty” and “La” is Laura Lamarca’s signature.
* last two lines (Tagalog) nipa hut, although small, the plants there, all different
For: Sunday Photo Fiction – July 16th 2017, Wordle 308 Jul 15 by brenda warren
16 responses
I love the poetic form of this, and the background is great. I think I would have run as well.
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glad you like this 🙂 enjoy your weekend 😀
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Like skin, it needs cream and care…….. the house is so beautifully personified. loved your verse.
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thank you, Kalpana 🙂 I love your tale, too!
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Great take on the prompt once more! Your form is so light – carries the words along almost rhythmically.
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many thanks 🙂
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This is famtastic! I love the form. Thanks.
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glad you love the form, Brenda 🙂
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Delightfully different!
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thanks, Keith 🙂
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Intriguing, throughout, and the last two lines have a musicality about them.
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thank you, colonialist 🙂 it’s part of one of our nursery rhymes!
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Great rhyming scheme I really got carried along
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awww, cheers, Jae 🙂
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What a delightful poetic form. My guess is if it was created in Italy whatever language you used in the couplet should not be your own, (so Italian would be OK for English writers).
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thank you, Oldegg 🙂
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