Moment – The Minute Poem

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I live one moment at a time
with you life chimes
time is precious
you’re my bonus

to be with you every moment
my own gallant
wish there’s no end
lover and friend

moment’s a time of excellence
of acceptance
of our weakness
of faith and us

For: MTB–The Minute Poem by Frank Hubeny in Meeting the Bar: Critique and Craft

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12 thoughts on “Moment – The Minute Poem

  1. I love how you got the pace to match the clip! And the rhymes in the lines:
    ‘to be with you every moment
    my own gallant’
    and
    ‘moment’s a time of excellence
    of acceptance’.

    Liked by 1 person

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