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I live one moment at a time
with you life chimes
time is precious
you’re my bonus
to be with you every moment
my own gallant
wish there’s no end
lover and friend
moment’s a time of excellence
of acceptance
of our weakness
of faith and us
For: MTB–The Minute Poem by Frank Hubeny in Meeting the Bar: Critique and Craft
You may say I’m a dreamer, but I’m not the only one. I hope someday you’ll join us. And the world will live as one. -John Lennon
Spread love everywhere you go. Let no one ever come to you without leaving happier. -Mother Teresa
Ladyleemanila, a lady in fringe, pretty in red
Her brains swirl like that crazy cappucino smile
Will continue prosaic poesies and never the while grows tired
Writes what’s close to her heart, be it her experience
Born and bred in one of exciting 7,100 islands
Bounces like a ball, hither and thither on the go
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12 responses to “Moment – The Minute Poem”
Simply lovely.
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thank you, Linda 🙂
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A love letter in minute form. Well done!
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many thanks, Beverly 🙂
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Oh one of my favourite moments in one of my favourite films, and such a good strong poem to go with it. Lovely synergy. XXX
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thank you, Alison 🙂
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Your words are quite true. Each moment we get is more precious than gold
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cheers, Walter 🙂
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I love how you got the pace to match the clip! And the rhymes in the lines:
‘to be with you every moment
my own gallant’
and
‘moment’s a time of excellence
of acceptance’.
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many thanks, Kim 🙂
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Nice sounding minute poem. This line stood out: “moment’s a time of excellence” Excellence comes one moment at a time.
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thank you, Frank 🙂
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