Deep in his heart, he’s taking his part

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This week’s photo prompt is provided by Dorothy. Thank you Dorothy!

Deep in his heart, he’s taking his part
Walking in the square
With all the cars of the tsars
White robe he wears

He sways as he plays
In the heat of the sun
His backpack a drawback
To conceal a gun

He reaches for the breech
It’s now or never
With full spirit he’s got to pull
Then everything went blur*

(c) ladyleemanila 2017

* Triquatrain form

DOOR Template Instructions

(5) Words: | REACH | DEEP | SQUARE | FULL | PLAY |

For: FFfAW Challenge-Week of October 24, 2017, Weekly Writing Prompt #112


13 responses

  1. dorothy

    Wonderful poem with a powerful meaning. Nice!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Russell J. Fellows

    Wonder what drove him to this? Interesting poem.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      I guess we’ll never know, thanks, Russell 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Fluid Phrase

    Beautiful poetry that paints a vivid picture of his mind and the setting. Loved it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      glad you loved it 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  4. michael1148humphris

    It is so sad when we can trust no one. Interesting image you painted for me.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Michael 🙂

      Like

  5. Priceless Joy

    Wonderful poem with such a chilling ending!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Priceless Joy 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  6. James

    I guess not all monks are peaceful or it’s just a disguise.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      could be a disguise, thanks, James 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Miriam

    Oh gosh, what a scene your words and picture wove.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Miriam 🙂

      Like

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