Saturday Mix – Lucky Dip, 5 May 2018 – Clarity Pyramid

tenor

HURT
with tears
abandon

broken heart and soul
when all’s been said and done
all those years of promises

“betrayal, thoughtlessness, careless”*

(c) ladyleemanila 2018

 * Clarity Pyramid

For: Saturday Mix – Lucky Dip, 5 May 2018

2 Comments

  1. Beautiful. I could feel the story develop over the seven lines. Well done using the clarity pyramid! Was harder than I anticipated but I enjoyed it. Hope you did too 😊

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