24 JULY 2020 Friday Fictioneers – Could you tell like it was in prose?

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PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from “What Is Water?” by Danielle Legros Georges: water, cloud, river, tell, casts, kite, descending, passports, heat, cluster, grapes, brown

Cluster of clouds as river flows
Shades of brown in the background of canvas
In the sky some kites rising and some descending
Could you tell like it was in prose?

Prose so beautiful like a song
Grapes so juicy, like to eat them right there
As the water spills, please do not be worried
I’m sure this work strung like gong

Gong striking from one end to next
Casting some spell where one loses mind
In the heat of the sun, perhaps too long out there
Would do anything being hexed

Hexed fine with some breath of luster
Passports all sorts of colour and of tribe
Dabbing of colour here and there make this all work
Clouds move five or six in cluster*

(c) ladyleemanila 2020

* The RemyLa Rhyme Form, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consists of 4 stanzas. Each stanza has four lines. The syllable count per stanza is 8/10/12/8 and rhyme scheme is abca defd ghig jklj. The first word of stanza 1 must also be the last word of stanza 4. The last word of stanza 1 must also be the first word of stanza 2 and the last word of stanza 2 must be the first word of stanza 3. Finally, the last word of stanza 3 must also be the first word of stanza 4.

This form is named after Laura’s daughter, Remy Lawren Lamarca. La is her signature.

For: 24 JULY 2020 Friday Fictioneers,  Whirligig 274

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