We taste every word twice

We taste every word twice

Fight or flight, sure, doubt

Right with all the spice

Know what it’s about

Fight or flight, sure, doubt

Assault of the senses

Risky to ask out

Crisis over fences

Right with all the spice

Strip of meaning

Power of being nice

To die of dreaming

Know what it’s about

Casting shadows of truth

Rushing to that rout

On board of this is Ruth*

(c) ladyleemanila 2020

Created by C. G. V. Lewis, the Quadrilew is a form of quatrain poem with an abab rhyming scheme, repeating lines, and contains an alternating syllable structure.

In the first verse, the poet may either start with a five or six syllable line. If the choice is five then the ‘sounding’ syllable count is (and opposite if the count is six):

VERSE ONE,
Line 1, 5 syllables.
Line 2, 6 syllables.
Line 3, 5 syllables.
Line 4, 6 syllables.

VERSE TWO,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 2 of the FIRST verse) has 6 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 5 syllables
Line 3 new line of 6 syllables
Line 4 new line of 5 syllables.

VERSE THREE,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 3 of the first verse) has 5 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 6 syllables.
Line 3 new line of 5 syllables.
Line 4 new line of 6 syllables.

VERSE FOUR,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 4 of the first verse) has 6 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 5 syllables.
Line 3 new line of 6 syllables.
Line 4 new line of 5 syllables.

If the first line of verse one has 6 syllables then the pattern is
Verse 1, 6565,
Verse 2, 5656,
Verse 3, 6565,
Verse 4 5656: (the rhyme pattern still being abab.)

For: https://puttingmyfeetinthedirt.com/2020/10/01/october-writing-prompts-3/, https://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2020/10/04/wordle-476/

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