Merely monsters or open minds?
They are capacious and roister
Out of their chains, two of the kinds
Jittery at times, like their oyster
They are capacious and roister
Dining room at the Weeping Mandolin
Jittery at times, like their oyster
Love their blind kitten, this witty twin
Dining room at the Weeping Mandolin
Elbows folded, speaking low
Love their blind kitten, this witty twin
Full of adventure as they grow
Elbows folded, speaking low
Out of their chains, two of the kinds
Full of adventure as they grow
Merely monsters or open minds?*
(c) ladyleemanila 2020
The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB in which the second and fourth lines of a quatrain recur as the first and third lines in the succeeding quatrain; each quatrain introduces a new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD. The first line of the series recurs as the last line of the closing quatrain, and third line of the poem recurs as the second line of the closing quatrain, rhyming ZAZA.
The design is simple:
Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
Line 4
Line 5 (repeat of line 2)
Line 6
Line 7 (repeat of line 4)
Line 8
Continue with as many stanzas as you wish, but the ending stanzathen repeats the second and fourth lines of the previous stanza (as its first and third lines), and also repeats the third line of the first stanza, as its second line, and the first line of the first stanza as its fourth. So the first line of the poem is also the last.
Last stanza:
Line 2 of previous stanza
Line 3 of first stanza
Line 4 of previous stanza
Line 1 of first stanza
For: http://www.octpowrimo.com/2020/10/octpowrimo-day-13-outside-box.html, https://puttingmyfeetinthedirt.com/2020/10/01/october-writing-prompts-3/, https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2020/10/12/wordle-210/, https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2020/10/13/photo-challenge-336/
4 responses to “OctPoWriMo Day 13 – Outside the Box”
So much love and joy in this one!
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thank you, Angela 🙂
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Haha .. loved it… it felt like a rap song… and i loved the picture …. 🙂
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haha so glad you loved it 🙂 thanks ❤
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