What do you see- 52 – 19 October’20

Image credit; Pisauikan@ Pixabay

( For the visually challenged reader, the image shows an old woman whose face is deeply lined. There is a faint smile on her face)

I was rummaging through the attic
in the filth, searching for some documents
old memento, toys and games of our antic
brown faded photos of our descents

I found an old photograph of a woman
she was beautiful, I save it as my keepsake
lines on her face tell us experience she’d done
her eyes conveyed her joy, hope and ache

an enigma, seducing me to deconstruct
I can feel her wraith in my zone
enlightening me of proper conduct
her past mistakes to atone

her alexithymia makes me want to express
something she wasn’t able to do
perhaps she was in distress
if only I could have a cue

like colouring her life with crayons
through the convex lens the search
looking for truth, spending aeons
thinking of it as my research

For: https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2020/10/19/what-do-you-see-52-19-october20/


16 responses

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  2. kittysverses

    A lady’s life well described, Lady Lee. I enjoyed the alternating rhyme sequence. 🙂

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, kitty 🙂

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      1. kittysverses

        You are welcome, Lady Lee. 🙂

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you 🙂

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  5. Sadje

    Thanks for participating in the challenge

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    1. ladyleemanila

      my pleasure, Sadje 🙂

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      1. Sadje

        💜

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  6. Sadje

    You’ve given her a back life, wishes and desires. Very well written Lady Lee

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Sadje 🙂

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      1. Sadje

        You’re welcome

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  7. Chris Hall

    Well penned! I especially like the last verse.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Chris 🙂

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