OctPoWriMo Day 30 – I am me

I am me and I dare to be different

Start the day with prayer, ignore the current

Be me! Be me! I love myself

I love reading books on the shelf

Cooking, travelling and of course, shopping

Be me as I wonder, jump and skipping

I am me, together with Him Indoors

In hot or cold weather we go outdoors

Together! Together! That’s us

Through thick or thin, without a fuss

Weathering storm, doesn’t matter what

Together we go through life without but*

(c) ladyleemanila 2020

The Staccato, created by Jan Turner, consists of two or more 6-line stanzas.

Rhyme scheme: a,a,b,b,c,c
*Required internal rhyme scheme interplay between line #1 and line #2 (see below explanation and examples).

Meter: 10, 10, 8, 8, 10, 10

Repeats: This form requires a 2-syllable repeat in Lines #3 and #6 as specified below.

As in a musical notation, The Staccato poetry form uses short repeats which are abruptly disconnected elements. The repeat words are read as rapid-fire speech, such as staccato music when played or sung. This form lends itself to strong emotion or instruction (i.e. military poems: “Charge on! Charge on!” etc.), a declaration (such as of an event: “We’re married! We’re married!” etc.), an instruction or emphasis of human emotion (such as love, hate, longing: “Be mine! Be mine!” etc.), strong observation (such as “Those eyes! Those eyes!” etc.) or any similar situation where a strong staccato repeat is desired.

The emphatic two-syllable repeat in this poetry form is written twice, consecutively, at the beginning of Line #3 (each repeat in Line #3 is followed by an exclamation mark), and once again at the beginning of Line #6 (with or without an exclamation mark in Line #6). Please see below poem examples.

Also, Line #2 requires an internal rhyme scheme that rhymes with a word within Line #1, usually falling on the 6th syllable (see examples below), but can fall earlier in those two lines as long as the internal rhyme matches the syllabic stress in both lines (Example: see below poem: “A Soldier’s Wife” where in Stanza #2 an alternative internal rhyme falls in Lines #1 and #2 on the 4th and 5th syllables with the words ‘motions’ and ‘notions’).

For: http://www.octpowrimo.com/2020/10/octpowrimo-day-30.html

6 responses

  1. Frank Hubeny

    I like starting the day with prayer.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Frank 🙂

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  2. deep26ti

    Beautiful you… Loved your pictures along with..
    the soft rhythmic feel felt so very good..


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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you 🙂

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  3. Readers Roost (@readersroost)

    A very nice, rhythmic poem.
    I’m me because I can’t be anything else. But I have never loved or even like myself very much, and I greatly doubt that I ever will.
    ~cie from poetry of the netherworld~

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Cie 🙂 be kind to yourself ❤

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