
THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from “A Donation of Shoes” by Ted Kooser: flap, toes, lingering, flat, shoes, laces, look, dried, confused, last, closet, swim
As this year is coming to a close
Virus lingering and we’re still confused
Hope is coming with the new vaccine
At last, a new beginning for us all
Spending most of our days in the closet
No new shoes, no pedicure on our toes
Wearing masks, washing hands, dried hands
As this year is coming to a close
We still cannot flap our wings nor swim
Virtual meetings, social distancing
Just looking at the pictures of our loved ones
Virus lingering and we’re still confused
Not meeting friends, drinks being flat
Shoe laces undone, wearing pyjamas
Potter around the house, doing jigsaws
Hope is coming with the new vaccine
Declutter the house, baked some bread
Back to basics and being minimalist
Count our blessing, know our priorities
At last, a new beginning for us all*
(c) ladyleemanila 2020

Cascade, a form created by Udit Bhatia, is all about receptiveness, but in a smooth cascading way like a waterfall. The poem does not have any rhyme scheme; therefore, the layout is simple. Say the first verse has three lines. Line one of verse one becomes the last line of verse two. To follow in suit, the second line of verse one becomes the last line of verse three. The third line of verse one now becomes the last line of verse four, the last stanza of the poem. See the structure example below:
a/b/c, d/e/A, f/g/B, h/i/C
To make the Cascade an even longer poem, use more lines in verse one. For example, if verse one has 6 lines, the poem must have seven stanzas so that each line of verse one is reused as a refrain in each following stanza (a cascading effect).
For: Tale Weaver – #308 – New Beginnings – 31st December | Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie (wordpress.com), The Whirligig: Whirligig 299 (sundayswhirligig.blogspot.com)
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts Lady Lee, happy new year.
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you’re welcome, Michael 🙂 Happy New Year!
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Well 2020 went quickly didn’t it? Looking back I achieved virtally nothing other than write poetry and short stories! Sadly Covid is still around and threatening many countries but my mask is still at hand..
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yes, we have to carry on wearing masks, washing hands, etc…. Happy New Year oldegg 🙂
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Any other year we’d be longing for such a simple, lazy time! Being that we need to makes it seem harder, but I know people happy not to visit their relatives and have an excuse!
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here’s to a covid-free year… Happy New Year! 🙂
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I love how you manage to find the positive
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thanks Jae 🙂 Happy New Year!
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