
In this forgiving world, time’s doorstep
Where we find each other mellowing
Noble and fragile in our own web
In this forgiving world, time’s doorstep
Where seasons come and go and ebb
Together our love is echoing
In this forgiving world, time’s doorstep
Where we find each other mellowing*
(c) ladyleemanila 2021
- A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

For: January 2021 Writing Prompts – Putting My Feet in the Dirt, Up Where We Belong – Challenge #174 | Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie (wordpress.com), Same, Same, But Different – Saturday Mix, 23 January 2021 | Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie (wordpress.com) see- find, blue- noble, soft- mellow, kind- forgiving, weak- fragile
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How lovely! Beautiful Triolet.
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thanks, Eugenia 🙂
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My pleasure!
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You wrote a lovely Triolet and thanks for linking it to my challenge.
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thanks and my pleasure 🙂
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