
THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from “Wild Geese Alighting on a Lake” by Anne Porter: neared, wings, surface, rippling, lake, drift, composed, water, arc, glided, settled, nest
Geneva the city with its lake
The mountains and my independence
Flew my wings and here I was awake
The first time I drifted from home
Tried to settle while I roam
Composed myself for my sake
Rippling water I glided for my entrance
Geneva the city with its lake
Trial and error while building my nest
Met a guy who would have guessed
Fell in love, didn’t know he was a snake
Broke my heart for he was a menace
Flew my wings and here I was awake
And so I keep on learning
New job, new language, new friends
Learned to skate and bake a cake
Found a job that was stupendous
Geneva the city with its lake
The little town that’s so peaceful
Where I first saw snow
Near and far I have to take
For my sins I need penance
Flew my wings and here I was awake
The arc of life for my keepsake
Love Geneva for its essence
Geneva the city with its lake
Flew my wings and here I was awake*
(c) ladyleemanila 2021

The Grá Reformata, created by Michael King, is based upon the Villanelle form.
Following the basic setting of the Villanelle, the a Grá Reformata has an extra couplet between each tercet. This couplet can be either rhymed within the structure of the rest of the poem, or in free verse, but always in iambic pentameter.
Format:
a-b-a
x-x
a-b-a
x-x
a-b-a
x-x
a-b-a
x-x
a-b-a
a-b-a-a
The x consists of the rhymed, or unrhymed iambic couplet.
For: The Whirligig: Whirligig 307 (sundayswhirligig.blogspot.com), Reena’s Xploration Challenge #174 – Reena Saxena (wordpress.com)
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Geneva in Gra Reformata …… by Lady Lee
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thanks for the reblog, Reena 🙂
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The format is nice, and you could weave a whole story in it. Kudos!
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glad you like it, Reena 🙂
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