








Try the lite variety
With different lanterns
One for each society
Colourful man yearns
With different lanterns
To give glow in the dark
For all the dancers
As they dance in the park
One for each society
I like the red one
That blue’s for royalty
Come and have some fun
Colourful man yearns
Different shape and design
They all take in turns
Enjoy the night with wines*
(c) ladyleemanila 2021

Created by C. G. V. Lewis, the Quadrilew is a form of quatrain poem with an abab rhyming scheme, repeating lines, and contains an alternating syllable structure.
In the first verse, the poet may either start with a five or six syllable line. If the choice is five then the ‘sounding’ syllable count is (and opposite if the count is six):
VERSE ONE,
Line 1, 5 syllables.
Line 2, 6 syllables.
Line 3, 5 syllables.
Line 4, 6 syllables.
VERSE TWO,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 2 of the FIRST verse) has 6 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 5 syllables
Line 3 new line of 6 syllables
Line 4 new line of 5 syllables.
VERSE THREE,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 3 of the first verse) has 5 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 6 syllables.
Line 3 new line of 5 syllables.
Line 4 new line of 6 syllables.
VERSE FOUR,
Line 1, (which is a REPEAT of line 4 of the first verse) has 6 syllables.
Line 2 new line of 5 syllables.
Line 3 new line of 6 syllables.
Line 4 new line of 5 syllables.
If the first line of verse one has 6 syllables then the pattern is
Verse 1, 6565,
Verse 2, 5656,
Verse 3, 6565,
Verse 4 5656: (the rhyme pattern still being abab.)
If wishing to create a longer poem then the next verse (5) must be a completely fresh set of four lines, these being used as before in the following three verses. Etcetera, etcetera.

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Great poem! But it seems like a puzzle to make one that goes with the rules:) and love all the lanterns for All Seasons! The light is beautiful dome like capture.. Have a great week ahead, Jesh
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thank you, Jesh 🙂 have a great week, too ❤
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Keeping yourself busy in lockdown in many ways, LadyLee 🙂 🙂 Thanks for sharing!
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my pleasure, Jo 🙂 🙂
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