
( For the visually challenged reader, the image shows a front view of Taj Mahal, Agra. The sun is either rising or setting in the back )
Taj Mahal, you’re so wonderful
So blessed that I’ve seen you
That day was so memorable
Sun was shining, sky’s blue
Symbol of India’s history
Jewel of Muslim art, glittery
A symbol
A symbol
Taj Mahal and its mystery
Taj Mahal, you’re so wonderful
First thing in the morning
Inside me woke up wondering
And the sun was shining
Love story of a lifetime
I could look at you anytime
Love story
Love story
Dreamy and all its paradigm
Taj Mahal, you’re so wonderful
Saw you when the sun set
Romantic with all the couples
One of India’s assets
Masterpiece of world’s heritage
Like being on the best stage
A masterpiece
A masterpiece
There’s nothing in comparison*
(c) ladyleemanila 2021


The Trijan Refrain, created by Jan Turner, consists of three 9-line stanzas, for a total of 27 lines. Line 1 is the same in all three stanzas, although a variation of the form is not to repeat the same line at the beginning of each stanza. In other words, the beginning line of each stanza can be different. The first four syllables of line 5 in each stanza are repeated as the double-refrain for lines 7 and 8. The Trijan Refrain is a rhyming poem with a set meter and rhyme scheme as follows:
Rhyme scheme: a/b/a/b/c/c/d,d refrain of first 4 words of line five /c
Meter: 8/6/8/6/8/8/4,4 refrain/8

For: What do you see # 71 – March 1st, 2021 – Keep it alive (lifeafter50forwomen.com), #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 215, #POET’SCHOICE – Word Craft ~ Prose & Poetry (wordcraftpoetry.com)
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A lovely tribute to the love that inspired the Taj Mahal..
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thank you 🙂
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What an amazing tribute to the Taj Mahal, Lady Lee. The Trijan Refrain is such an interesting form. Thanks for sharing. ❤
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my pleasure, Colleen ❤
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[…] Lady Lee Manila; Taj Mahal you’re so wonderful […]
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Wonderfully written Lady Lee. Thanks for this lovely tribute.
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you’re welcome, Sadje 🙂
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Thank you for sharing this great poem, an a wonderful and worldwide wellknown building of manifested love. Michael
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my pleasure, Michael 🙂
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Thank you! :-))
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