
THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from “Tonsure” by Kevin Young: find, beard, make, bowed, father, blocks, men, bitter, faces, buying, mends, became
silvery web became tangled
around his throat he strangled
can’t come out he became bitter
bowed his face, he’s not a quitter, got untangled
as he’s getting older he finds
his father meeting with his minds
same principles, beard and style
becoming like him with smile and spellbinds
shirked his responsibilities
but buys and mends utilities
such contradictions in his life
making him strife with his wife from the Philippines*
(c) ladyleemanila 2021
- Florette

For: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/10/05/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-poets-choice-3/, https://puttingmyfeetinthedirt.com/2021/10/01/october-2021-writing-prompts/, http://sundayswhirligig.blogspot.com/2021/09/whirligig-338.html
Trouble brewing, lols! 🙂
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thanks 🙂
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Oh, oh! Seems he is in trouble! lol
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haha… thanks, Eugi 🙂
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LOL! Well, I would have to say he better learn to love his wife from the Philippines! Huge hugs to you, Lady Lee! ❤
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thank you, Colleen 🙂 hugs to you, too ❤
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web
wipe away
no sweat
and yet danger persisits~!
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thank you 🙂
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Ha ha, that was a good one 🙂
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thank you, Vignesh 🙂
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Oh my, sound personal 😰
Great rhythm as always though.
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thank you, Jude 🙂
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My pleasure.
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