
THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from “Big Clock” by Li-Young Lee: clock, face, key, saw, borders, safe, gain, forgetting, smiling, spilled, goes, calendar
Thank you for smiling
Makes my day when I’m sad
All through the calendar
Makes me safe round the clock
Borders of lavender
Thank you for smiling
Even if I forget
Where did I leave that key?
Or when I spill my tea
Or busy as a bee
Thank you for smiling
And when I see your face
Gaining that confidence
To try and try again
Years of experience
Thank you for smiling
It goes with everything
And no need to worry
What comes up must come down
So what is the hurry?*
(c) ladyleemanila 2022
- The Monchielle is a poem that consists of four five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in each verse. Each line within the stazas consist of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme. The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.
- The Monchielle form was created by Jim T. Henriksen.

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Thanks for the mini lesson on a form of poetry I wasn’t previously familiar with. And thanks for the poem about smiles. 🙂
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my pleasure 🙂
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Thank you for being part of this challenge! 🙂
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thanks, too for the challenge 🙂
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