#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 262, 2/22/22, #THEMEPROMPT – TRANSITIONS

Change Improvement Development Adjust Transform Concept

in my mental soliloquize
each transition is like limbo
lack of accountability

every ligament stretched to tee
an air of malaise I should know
stow it! sounding how the pig cries

tick each one as I’m in the guise
aghast that I could be a foe
I could be anyone but me

my heart still cordate, I agree
who’s the real me, from head to toe?
sometimes I can’t answer the whys

every one wants a piece of me
and I’d like to swim in the sea*

(c) ladyleemanila 2017

* Trilonnet, created by Shelley A. Cephas, is a 14-line poem made up of four three-line verses of 8 syllables (iambic tetrameter) and one rhyming couplet or four three-lined verses of 10 syllables (iambic pentameter) and one rhyming couplet.

Each 3 line verse is an unrhymed triplet. Each triplet has a rhyme scheme of abc. It is related to a sonnet in that it made up of 14 lines. There are 2 rhyme schemes for this form:

abc abc abc abc dd

or abc cba abc cba dd

This form is written in either iambic tetrameter or iambic pentameter.

For: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2022/02/22/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-262-2-22-22-themeprompt/, https://pixtowords.com/2022/02/28/transition-pic-and-a-word-challenge/


18 responses

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  2. yvettemcalleiro

    Great poem, Lady Lee! I love your couplet at the end. 🙂

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    1. ladyleemanila

      glad you like it, Yvette 🙂

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  3. judeitakali

    beautiful form, this trilonnet and your word choice was too.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Jude 🙂

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      1. judeitakali

        My pleasure.

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  4. D. Avery @shiftnshake

    What a tricky form. Brava!

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you 🙂

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  5. harmonykentonline

    This is a new form for me. Brilliantly done! 💕🙂

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you 🙂 ❤

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  6. Colleen M. Chesebro

    Lady Lee, you’ve done it again! What a fabulous poem. Thanks for introducing us to a new form. YOU go, girl! ❤

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Colleen 🙂 so glad you like it ❤

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  7. utahan15

    me be
    see it run
    spot
    music
    no shh
    it is us

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you 🙂

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  8. ben Alexander

    wow, amazing! I’ve never heard of a “Trilonnet” before – I’ll have to try it! thank you 🙂


    David

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    1. ladyleemanila

      you’re welcome, David 🙂 please try it

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  9. Annette Rochelle Aben

    Well done! I have never seen this form before. 🙂

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Annette 🙂

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