
in my mental soliloquize
each transition is like limbo
lack of accountability
every ligament stretched to tee
an air of malaise I should know
stow it! sounding how the pig cries
tick each one as I’m in the guise
aghast that I could be a foe
I could be anyone but me
my heart still cordate, I agree
who’s the real me, from head to toe?
sometimes I can’t answer the whys
every one wants a piece of me
and I’d like to swim in the sea*
(c) ladyleemanila 2017
* Trilonnet, created by Shelley A. Cephas, is a 14-line poem made up of four three-line verses of 8 syllables (iambic tetrameter) and one rhyming couplet or four three-lined verses of 10 syllables (iambic pentameter) and one rhyming couplet.
Each 3 line verse is an unrhymed triplet. Each triplet has a rhyme scheme of abc. It is related to a sonnet in that it made up of 14 lines. There are 2 rhyme schemes for this form:
abc abc abc abc dd
or abc cba abc cba dd
This form is written in either iambic tetrameter or iambic pentameter.

For: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2022/02/22/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-262-2-22-22-themeprompt/, https://pixtowords.com/2022/02/28/transition-pic-and-a-word-challenge/
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Great poem, Lady Lee! I love your couplet at the end. 🙂
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glad you like it, Yvette 🙂
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beautiful form, this trilonnet and your word choice was too.
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thank you, Jude 🙂
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My pleasure.
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What a tricky form. Brava!
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thank you 🙂
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This is a new form for me. Brilliantly done! 💕🙂
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thank you 🙂 ❤
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Lady Lee, you’ve done it again! What a fabulous poem. Thanks for introducing us to a new form. YOU go, girl! ❤
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thank you, Colleen 🙂 so glad you like it ❤
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me be
see it run
spot
music
no shh
it is us
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thank you 🙂
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wow, amazing! I’ve never heard of a “Trilonnet” before – I’ll have to try it! thank you 🙂
❤
David
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you’re welcome, David 🙂 please try it
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Well done! I have never seen this form before. 🙂
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thank you, Annette 🙂
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