#TANKATUESDAY Weekly #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 266, 3/22/22, #THEMEPROMPT –  Fire and Water

Visions of empty room

The love used to blossom

And the moon was promised

Hope came but left too soon

He’s not being honest

Visions of empty room

Started with smoke now fire

And water can’t stop it

And he left, just like that

We thought, it’s best to split

Visions of empty room

No matter what I do

No matter where I look

Pieces of him still there

Like my world was shook

Visions of empty room

And with the help of time

I’ll be brave and move on

He’ll just be ghost and gone

I look forward to dawn*

(c) ladyleemanila 2022

  • The Monchielle is a poem that consists of four five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in each verse. Each line within the stazas consist of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme. The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.

For: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2022/03/22/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-266-3-22-22-themeprompt/


10 responses

  1. ben Alexander

    Ommigosh, Lady Lee – I love this! And thank you for introducing me to new [to me] form!

    Sincerely,
    David

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      so glad you love this, David 🙂

      Like

  2. yvettemcalleiro

    I love the last line! Great poem, Lady Lee! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Yvette 🙂

      Like

  3. harmonykentonline

    So lovely and evocative, Ladylee 💕🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you 🙂

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  4. Colleen Chesebro: WordCraftPoetry

    This is a lovely form, Lady Lee. Lost love born of fire and water. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Colleen ❤

      Liked by 1 person

  5. Reena Saxena

    Nice!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Reena 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

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