
A lingering look towards the sea
My heart hoping to see the ship
My captain coming to rescue me
My legs carried me in the strip
With stretched arms waiting to be hugged
My heart hoping to see the ship
Since we were young I was always thugged
Instead the rain comes and I’m drenched
With stretched arms waiting to be hugged
A thirst that can never be quenched
Rocking my whole being with hope
Instead the rain comes and I’m drenched
The door to my heart’s there to cope
As narrow as the strip I wait
Rocking my whole being with hope
Now the passage being very strait
A lingering look towards the sea
Here I am waiting for our fate
My captain coming to rescue me*
(c) ladyleemanila 2022

The Terzanelle is a poetry type which is a combination of the villanelle and the terza rima forms. It is a 19-line poem consisting of five interlocking triplets/tercets plus a concluding quatrain in which the first and third lines of the first triplet appear as refrains. The middle line of each triplet is repeated, reappearing as the last line of the succeeding triplet with the exception of the center line of the next-to-the-last stanza which appears in the quatrain. The rhyme and refrain scheme for the triplets is as follows:
1. A
2. B
3. A
4. b
5. C
6. B
7. c
8. D
9. C
10. d
11. E
12. D
13. e
14. F
15. E
Ending Type 1:
16. f
17. A
18. F
19. A
Ending Type 2:
16. f
17. F
18. A
19. A



For: https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2022/04/12/photo-challenge-409/, https://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2022/04/17/wordle-549/, http://www.a-to-zchallenge.com/2022/04/atozchallenge-t-is-for-tomorrow.html, https://www.napowrimo.net/day-twenty-three-8/
8 responses
What a lovely poem. This form sounds confusing, but I like how you wrote out an example. Thanks for sharing.
https://thebookconnectionccm.blogspot.com/2022/04/blogging-from-to-z-2022-talent.html
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thank you, Cheryl 🙂
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This I am familiar with. I do believe I tried writing one.
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that’s cool, Jamie 🙂
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Terzanelle – the name is so stylish and fancy 🙂 Never heard
great lines – the longing , the passion , the wait and the hope all reflected perfectly
Dropping by from a to z “The Pensive”
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thank you, afshan 🙂 so glad you like it ❤
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Lovely share
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thank you, Tanvir 🙂
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