
My mind’s puzzled as I walk on wet ground
Judging from our texts things are not going well
Heart pounding, mouth dry and I couldn’t tell
Film of disappointment going round and round
The breeze was still as the background
Filtering hurt and pain are we in hell?
My mind’s puzzled as I walk on wet ground
Judging from our texts things are not going well
We’ve gone through a lot, can we still stick aound?
Mindful of the good times and adventures so swell
Things happened and gone was the spell
No regrets, best to part, that I have found
My mind’s puzzled as I walk on wet ground*
(c) ladyleemanila 2022
- Rondel – A French form consisting of 13 lines: two quatrains and a quintet, rhyming as follows: ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats.

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what was that noise?
was it more than just loud girls and boys!
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what noise?
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a constant banging in the street and my kid got a phone call at four am
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