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Friday Fictioneers – Such a kiss

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Image by Rochelle Wissoff-Fields

Such a kiss

Was like a star eager to shine

Such a kiss

You held me and that was a bliss

Shells from the beach kept like a shrine

Not fearful and everything’s fine

Clasp and cuddle, grateful for this

Such a kiss*

(c) ladyleemanila 2022

  • The Rondelet is a French form consisting of a single septet with two rhymes and one refrain: AbAabbA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats. The refrain is written in tetra-syllabic or dimeter and the other lines are twice as long – octasyllabic or tetrameter.

For: https://rochellewisoff.com/2022/08/17/19-august-2022/

8 responses

  1. Bear

    beautiful poem. Ah, the kisses that recalls to mind.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thanks, Bear 🙂

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  2. Bernadette Braganza

    A lovely poem and learning something new — twice the joy!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Bernadette 🙂

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  3. Vignesh S Raj

    That’s an interesting poem keeping in mind the structure

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Vignesh 🙂

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  4. michael1148humphris

    Lovely yes let the stars shine,

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thanks, Michael 🙂

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