
THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from “On Reading Allen Ginsburg’s ‘Homework’” by Andrea Carter Brown: fold, dirty, linens, tore, think, wash, closets, matter, clean, strangers, removed, paper
Cellar to clean
Cellar full of linens
Linens and papers
Linens and closets
Closets with bits and pieces
Closets with torn and dirty toys
Toys they no longer play
Toys they removed from their rooms
Rooms just for sleeping
Rooms sometimes with strangers
Strangers in the night
Strangers and friends
Friends for life
Friends for coffee
Coffee and tea
Coffee in the morning
Morning exercise
Morning to think
Think about what matters most
Think about the future
Future of the children
Future of the family
Family gathering
Family meeting
Meeting in the office
Meeting to discuss things
Things that matter
Things to wash
Wash and dry
Wash and fold
Fold the paper
Fold and sort
Sort things in the cellar
Sort things to keep
Keep for sentimental reasons
Keep for posterity
Posterity that enlightens
Posterity that will come
Come and be prepared
Come and ruthlessly select
Select what to keep
Select what to throw away
Away and all the memories
Away fly the nest
Nest so cosy
Nest preparing for life
Life that was fun
Life to treasure
Treasure
Fun*
(c) ladyleemanila 2022
- The Blitz Poem, a poetry form created by Robert Keim.
- This form of poetry is a stream of short phrases and images with repetition and rapid flow.
- Begin with one short phrase, it can be a cliché. Begin the next line with another phrase that begins with the same first word as line 1. The first 48 lines should be short, but at least two words.
- The third and fourth lines are phrases that begin with the last word of the 2nd phrase, the 5th and 6th lines begin with the last word of the 4th line, and so on, continuing, with each subsequent pair beginning with the last word of the line above them, which establishes a pattern of repetition.
- Continue for 48 total lines with this pattern, And then the last two lines repeat the last word of line 48, then the last word of line 47.
- The title must be only three words, with some sort of preposition or conjunction joining the first word from the third line to the first word from the 47th line, in that order.
- There should be no punctuation. When reading a BLITZ, it is read very quickly, pausing only to breathe.
For: https://rochellewisoff.com/2022/09/21/23-september-2022/, http://sundayswhirligig.blogspot.com/2022/09/whirligig-388.html
6 responses
This was delightful! It’s kind of like trying to follow a conversation with someone who has ADD 🙂
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thank you, granonine 🙂
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A lot of thought and talent shown here.
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thank you, Oneta 🙂
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Clever poem.
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thank you 🙂
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