Trying to be fit

THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from “On Friendship” by Hagit Grossman: friend, night, window, come, eat, retrace, toss, sit, wait, dinner, juice, sublime

Being fit is hard

Walk along the yard

Better to go out with friend

Cycling and swimming

As the sun’s grinning

But sometimes it’s hard to bend

I watch what I eat

No treats even sweet

Avoid juice just drink water

Walk after dinner

Feel like a winner

In the garden I potter

I don’t sit and wait

In gym I do weight

Some cross-training and treadmill

Open the window

Drink tea with gingko

I’ll lose weight, I hope I will

Tossing and turning

Each day I’m learning

Retrace what I have gone through

Some change though sublime

And I take my time

To be fit these things I do*

(c) ladyleemanila 2022

  • The Alouette, created by Jan Turner, consists of two or more stanzas of 6 lines each, with the following set rules:
  • Meter: 5, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7
  • Rhyme Scheme: a, a, b, c, c, b

For: https://alwayswrite.blog/2022/10/05/wqw-38-four-aspects-to-being-fit-as-a-fiddle/, http://sundayswhirligig.blogspot.com/2022/09/whirligig-390.html

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