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THIS WEEK’S WORDS come from “Winter: A Dirge” by Robert Burns: hail, rain, sleet, bank, beast, bird, heartless, joyless, soothes, request, resign, fancy
Sleet, rain, hail I have this task
A recent challenge to myself
A beast of a battle I say
Joyless and the sky is grey
Fancy an advice from an elf
Once I have the know-how I bask
Could be heartless but I don’t ask
Fear I laid it up on the shelf
Resign to do it come what may
Birds fly and I’ve to find my way
Believe in the thing-in-itself
Of bottling some hope in a flask
A novel way to undergo
Slow but surely it makes me grow*
(c) ladyleemanila 2023
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Trilonnet, created by Shelley A. Cephas, is a 14-line poem made up of four three-line verses of 8 syllables (iambic tetrameter) and one rhyming couplet or four three-lined verses of 10 syllables (iambic pentameter) and one rhyming couplet.
Each 3 line verse is an unrhymed triplet. Each triplet has a rhyme scheme of abc. It is related to a sonnet in that it made up of 14 lines. There are 2 rhyme schemes for this form:
abc abc abc abc dd
or abc cba abc cba dd
For: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2023/01/03/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-301/, https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2023/01/03/photo-challenge-447/, http://sundayswhirligig.blogspot.com/2022/12/whirligig-403.html
12 responses
Another new form, and another lovely poem to introduce it to me! This one looks like it would take me a lot longer to write than others. Very nice.
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glad you like it, Lisa 🙂
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oh! this is a new form for me, and you knocked it out of the park, LLM! Well done ❤
~David
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thanks, David ❤
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That’s a new form for me, Lady Lee, but I love the poem you created with it.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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so glad you like the poem, yvette 🙂
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Lady Lee, this form has a lovely rhythm. I especially love the last two lines: “A novel way to undergo
Slow, but surely it makes me grow.” Happy New Year!
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so glad you like the poem, Colleen 🙂 thank you ❤
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You’re welcome. 🧡
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I like how this plan marched down the page. I predict success.
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thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome, Lady Lee 🙂
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