
my life might be flawed
desire to heal as I wept
meditate with hope
(c) ladyleemanila 2023

to soar up the cliffs
I long to fly in the sky
free from worries
let’s go fly a kite
soar up for all to enjoy
make everyone glad
For: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2023/01/17/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-303-1-17-23/
19 responses
I enjoyed these 🙂 and I especially like how you ended on an upbeat note! ❤
~David
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thank you, David 🙂
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Such aspirations for freedom 💜
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thanks, willow ❤
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I love these, Lady Lee! They are so light-hearted. 🙂
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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thank you, yvette 🙂
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Beautiful ❤
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thanks 🙂
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These are beautiful senryu, Lady Lee. I like how each poem builds on the next one. 💛
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glad you like them, Colleen ❤
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You’re so welcome.
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Beautifully written, Lady Lee.
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thank you, Eugenia 🙂
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My pleasure.💖
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She is headed in the right direction. Nice ones, Lady Lee.
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thank you ❤
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You’re welcome.
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Lovely write, Lady Lee. 🙂
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thank you, kitty 🙂
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