Tanka Tuesday – Senryū

my life might be flawed

desire to heal as I wept

meditate with hope

(c) ladyleemanila 2023

to soar up the cliffs
I long to fly in the sky
free from worries

let’s go fly a kite
soar up for all to enjoy
make everyone glad

For: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2023/01/17/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-303-1-17-23/


19 responses

  1. ben Alexander

    I enjoyed these 🙂 and I especially like how you ended on an upbeat note! ❤

    ~David

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, David 🙂

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  2. willowdot21

    Such aspirations for freedom 💜

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thanks, willow ❤

      Like

  3. yvettemcalleiro

    I love these, Lady Lee! They are so light-hearted. 🙂

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, yvette 🙂

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  4. poetisatinta

    Beautiful ❤

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thanks 🙂

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  5. Colleen M. Chesebro

    These are beautiful senryu, Lady Lee. I like how each poem builds on the next one. 💛

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    1. ladyleemanila

      glad you like them, Colleen ❤

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      1. Colleen M. Chesebro

        You’re so welcome.

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  6. Eugenia

    Beautifully written, Lady Lee.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Eugenia 🙂

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      1. Eugenia

        My pleasure.💖

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  7. msjadeli

    She is headed in the right direction. Nice ones, Lady Lee.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you ❤

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      1. msjadeli

        You’re welcome.

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  8. kittysverses

    Lovely write, Lady Lee. 🙂

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, kitty 🙂

      Like

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