
Image credit; Sylvian Sarrailh @ Digiartque
I’m trying something new this week. This is a digital art image. It shows a man standing in front of a square portal that shows a scene from another place. Stairs lead up to this portal.
I’m going up the portal
To be full of fun
To the sea to snorkel
Get on with the hurdle
For sure it shines, the sun
I’m going up the portal
May die tomorrow, we’re mortal
What we have done is done
To the sea to snorkel
I like to giggle and chortle
Negative vibes away I shun
I’m going up the portal
I think all soil’s fertile
Complaints I have none
To the sea to snorkel
I love yellow and purple
In the summer I like to run
I’m going up the portal
To the sea to snorkel*
(c) ladyleemanila 2023
*A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

For: https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2023/01/23/what-do-you-see-170-january-23-3023/, https://carrotranch.com/2023/01/23/january-23-story-challenge-in-99-words/
12 responses
fun and beautiful villanelle.🌼🤍
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thanks, Jude 🙂
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Such a pleasure.
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Fun take, Lady Lee. 🙂
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thanks, kitty 🙂
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What a fun poem, well done.
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thank you, Mason 🙂
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Fantastic villanelle!
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thank you, Nicole 🙂
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I love the rhythm and flow of your poem Lee. Thanks for joining in with this fun poem.
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so glad you like it, Sadje 🙂
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Of course my friend
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