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Friday Fictioneers and Wordle 582 – a mystery

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PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll

Beneath this old house is a mystery

Sky’s falling, heaven and hell flowing

On serial pain within our history

Beneath this old house is a mystery

Awful, weather-cold and blistery

Urgency for atonement growing

Beneath this old house is a mystery

Sky’s falling, heaven and hell flowing*

(c) ladyleemanila 2023

*A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

For: https://rochellewisoff.com/2023/01/25/28-january-2023/, https://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2022/12/11/wordle-582/

14 responses

  1. Brenda’s Thoughts

    Lovely and mysterious poem!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thanks, Brenda 🙂

      Like

  2. athling2001

    Well done. Beautiful poem.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you 🙂

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  3. poetisatinta

    Lovely poem ❤

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you 🙂

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  4. oneta hayes

    Wonderful result from your multi-prompt endeavor.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Oneta 🙂

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  5. Bill

    An excellent poem. 🙂

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Bill 🙂

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  6. Mason Bushell

    A beautiful poem, well done.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thanks, Mason 🙂

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  7. James McEwan

    The triolet can be deceptive when you think the lines are repeated. So I enjoy this form it when the poem, as you have done, creates an emotional feel or lamenting mystery. Loved it.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      so glad you love it, James 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

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