#TankaTuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 319, 5/9/2023

© Terri Webster Schrandt

Terri says: “As May brightens 2023, I came across this image in my archives from spring 2018. My hubby and I spent 12 summer weekends at our Sacramento River Delta campground, where wind and board sports are a must-do. After a long day on the water, many of us gathered on the levee to watch the sunsets and chat about our water time. Wildflowers like these purple radishes grew profusely on the levees in the spring. This one seems to frame the sunset on the expanse of the river just so.”

A peaceful state as we watch
And we wait for what future brings
Counting our blessing through the years

It’s time to carve another notch
Some deals in life and what springs
As we share some laughters and tears

We stick like mud through quirks and botch
Holding on to news with our wings
We sail through life, the sea so clear

Finding each other in our splotch
Every cell in our body swings
Challenging and shooting our fears

And so we watch the peaceful sea
The love within that is the key*

*Trilonnet

For: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2023/05/09/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-319-5-9-2023/


17 responses

  1. Colleen M. Chesebro

    I feel the love you share in this poem, Lady Lee. It’s really beautiful. 💜

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Colleen ❤

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      1. Colleen M. Chesebro

        You’re welcome.

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  2. besondersite

    This is so beautifully written!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you 🙂

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  3. msjadeli

    This feels like an easy relationship between two people who know each other very well.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, yes, more than thirty years 🙂

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      1. msjadeli

        🙂

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  4. poetisatinta

    That is really lovely ❤️

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you ❤

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  5. yvettemcalleiro

    Really nice, Lady Lee! I had no idea so many words rhymed with watch. Lol! Great poem!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. ladyleemanila

      haha trying hard, me! thanks, Yvette 🙂

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  6. Nicole Horlings

    Beautiful!

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thanks, Nicole 🙂

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  7. Sadje

    Lovely.

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thanks, Sadje 🙂

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      1. Sadje

        My pleasure

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