TankaTuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 320, 5/15/2023 – Work & Play

As we spiel we have fun

frolicking away

all sunshine, lollipops and rainbows for us

no worry in the world

just having some fun

And as for employment

take it seriously

dedicate our lives doing it properly

we know it’s important

in order to live

Both need job and diddle

happy and content

whatever it is think of it as hobby

don’t forget mental health

have a balance life*

(c) ladyleemanila 2023

*Double Ennead

For: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2023/05/16/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-320-5-15-2023/


18 responses

  1. ben Alexander

    don’t forget mental health

    I really struggle with this aspect of life, Lady Lee… your poem is not only lovely but totally spot on!

    Much love,
    David

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    1. ladyleemanila

      you’ll be alright, David 🙂 take care ❤

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  2. Melissa Lemay

    Wonderful. I love the balance and ease of your poem. Love the double ennead.😄❤️

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Melissa 🙂

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  3. msjadeli

    I like the work play scale you have balanced. I also used diddle in my poem 🙂

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    1. ladyleemanila

      cool diddle! thank you 🙂

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      1. msjadeli

        You’re very welcome 🙂

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  4. Colleen M. Chesebro

    I loved, “job and diddle!” How cute is that? Well done, Lady Lee. 🌸

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    1. ladyleemanila

      haha you like it! thanks, Colleen 🙂

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      1. Colleen M. Chesebro

        Wasn’t there a song or poem: diddle a while with me… ? LOL!

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  5. Frewin55

    Diddle – I love it…

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    1. ladyleemanila

      Thanks, Frewin 🙂

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  6. Gwen M. Plano

    Balance, so key. Beautifully done, Lady Lee. 😊

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you, Gwen 🙂

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  7. CHUONTHIS

    Love your poem, and Alan Watts! ❤️

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thank you 🙂

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  8. yvettemcalleiro

    A balanced life and mental health are so important. Great poem, Lady Lee!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. ladyleemanila

      thanks, Yvette 🙂

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