When fish runaway, I snapped
My breath so cold and blue grass flapped
Overlapping season I crack
With you it’s like seeping white wine
Giving you my all, limb and spine
Rushing to get out of my track
Don’t runaway, lots of stones
Here lies my love, says the gravestone
And all I have is my backpack*

(c) ladyleemanila 2017

* The Nove Otto poetry form was created by Scott J. Alcorn. It is a nine-lined poem with 8 syllables per line (isosyllabic). The rhyme scheme is as follows: aacbbcddc.

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For: Writing Prompt #209 “It’s All in the Title”, Wordle 301 May 27 by brenda warren

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15 responses to “When fish runaway”

  1. Very intriguing!

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    1. thanks, Jael 🙂

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      1. Most welcome 🙂

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  2. I like it!

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    1. thank you, Annell 🙂

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  3. I always admire your success with tricky rhyme schemes.

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    1. thank you, colonialist 🙂

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  4. All I have is my backpack…such is life. Delightful.

    My Sunday Whirl – Heaven can wait

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    1. many thanks, Keith 🙂

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  5. An intriguing poem – always admire use of a form – images pop here

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    1. many thanks 🙂

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  6. cheers, Michael 🙂

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  7. Nicely done Lady Lee..

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  8. Giving you my all, limb and spine – is my favourite line – superb write!

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    1. cheers, Jae 🙂

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