dark-dawn

sun peeks through violet sky
we look at it and wonder why
it looks so peaceful we can fly
against the velvety sky stood in shadow the skyline
indigo clouds cover up the first stars that might shine
the chill of the light and a promise of a night divine
trees on the sides that go bold
faded highway that lay cold
all was dark as we strolled
we’re on our way home
world so monochrome
and we say shalom
till we meet again
it was nice to ken
time to say amen*

* The Christ-in-a-Rhyme, a shape poem of the spiriatual nature, was created by Christina R Jussaume on October 3, 2006, consists of five 3-lined stanza that must rhyme (scheme for this form is aaa, bbb, ccc, ddd, eee) and a syllable count of each stanza is as follows:

Stanza 1 – 8 syllables
Stanza 2 – 14 syllables
Stanza 3 – 7 syllables
Stanza 4 and 5 – 5 syllables.

The poem should be centered to show the cross that will be created. This form was created in memory her mother, Christina. The form and the example poem are copyrighted in Christina R Jussaume’s book, “My Walk with Jesus,” published by Publishamerica.#

For: Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 47 – #Haiku #Tanka #Haibun: Shadow & Light

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9 responses to “Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 47 – #Haiku #Tanka #Haibun: Shadow & Light”

  1. What a beautiful poem, I love the form of it and what it signifies.
    Sue’s photo is absolutely stunning too and fits perfectly 🙂

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    1. thank you, Judy 🙂 have a lovely day!

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      1. You’re welcome and have a lovely day, too 🙂

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  2. Lovely poem, Lady Lee…and I am honoured that you chose one of my photographs to illustrate it 🙂

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    1. thank you, Sue 🙂 I think it was one of your photo prompt challenges, just got it from my archive, cheers again!

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      1. It was… a local, stormy dawn 🙂

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  4. Colleen Chesebro

    I love these acrostics poems too. The form gives more meaning to the words. Delightful! ❤

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    1. glad you like it, Colleen ❤

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