PHOTO PROMPT © Lisa Fox
To dream a dream within a dream
Some of them simmering
Some secretive within the theme
I wake up shivering
Trickle the mind and all senses
Shadows of the past pretenses
Trickle the mind
Trickle the mind
Some habits of our defenses
To dream a dream within a dream
Roots of them I don’t know
And sometimes falling in a stream
Salty dreams in a flow
Eyes brimmed with tears, stones to pick
Sometimes dreams give my mind a trick
Eyes brimmed with tears
Eyes brimmed with tears
Like hitting my head with a brick
To dream a dream within a dream
Traffic within the mind
Some vast stories in a meme
Happily intertwined
Secrets to hide, guilty or not
Some funny and some like a plot
Secrets to hide
Secrets to hide
One day I’ll be able to jot*
(c) ladyleemanila 2024
*The Trijan Refrain
For: https://rochellewisoff.com/2024/05/08/10-may-2024/, https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2024/05/08/inspirational-writing-prompts-on-dreams/, https://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2024/04/28/wordle-652/, https://estherchilton.co.uk/2024/05/08/writing-prompts-13/
12 responses to ““To dream a dream within a dream””
Beautiful imagery. I enjoyed the flow of the words also.
LikeLiked by 1 person
thank you, Angela 🙂
LikeLike
Beautiful poem. The repetitions make the poem haunting.
Thanks for participating in the writing prompt.
Regards,
Cai.
LikeLiked by 1 person
thank you, Cal 🙂
LikeLike
A dream within a dream, I am so glad that you reminded me about Edgar Poe.
LikeLiked by 1 person
thank you, Michael 🙂
LikeLike
A fascinating glimpse into those nighttime ponderings.
Jen
LikeLiked by 1 person
thanks, Jen 🙂
LikeLike
LikeLiked by 1 person
thanks, granonine 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
A great poem about dreams 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
thank you, Esther 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person