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To dream a dream within a dream

Some of them simmering

Some secretive within the theme

I wake up shivering

Trickle the mind and all senses

Shadows of the past pretenses

Trickle the mind

Trickle the mind

Some habits of our defenses

To dream a dream within a dream

Roots of them I don’t know

And sometimes falling in a stream

Salty dreams in a flow

Eyes brimmed with tears, stones to pick

Sometimes dreams give my mind a trick

Eyes brimmed with tears

Eyes brimmed with tears

Like hitting my head with a brick

To dream a dream within a dream

Traffic within the mind

Some vast stories in a meme

Happily intertwined

Secrets to hide, guilty or not

Some funny and some like a plot

Secrets to hide

Secrets to hide

One day I’ll be able to jot*

(c) ladyleemanila 2024

*The Trijan Refrain

For: https://rochellewisoff.com/2024/05/08/10-may-2024/, https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2024/05/08/inspirational-writing-prompts-on-dreams/, https://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2024/04/28/wordle-652/, https://estherchilton.co.uk/2024/05/08/writing-prompts-13/

12 responses to ““To dream a dream within a dream””

  1. Beautiful imagery. I enjoyed the flow of the words also.

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    1. thank you, Angela 🙂

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  2. Beautiful poem. The repetitions make the poem haunting.

    Thanks for participating in the writing prompt.

    Regards,

    Cai.

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    1. thank you, Cal 🙂

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  3. michael1148humphris

    A dream within a dream, I am so glad that you reminded me about Edgar Poe.

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    1. thank you, Michael 🙂

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  4. A fascinating glimpse into those nighttime ponderings.

    Jen

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    1. thanks, Jen 🙂

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  5. Beautiful poetry, ended with Poe’s completely appropriate words.

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    1. thanks, granonine 🙂

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  6. A great poem about dreams 😊

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    1. thank you, Esther 🙂

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You may say I’m a dreamer, but I’m not the only one. I hope someday you’ll join us. And the world will live as one. -John Lennon

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