There are some things that can’t be altered
And things that can’t be answered
However awkward
Scattered
Dreams
Sometimes things you do caused me angered
Can’t help but to be captured
However awkward
Scattered
Screams
Unprepared but caught in a blizzard
I’d do things to be bettered
However awkward
Scattered
Gleams*
(c) ladyleemanila 2017
* Triquint, a poem for created by Sylvia A. Feeley, which consists of 3 verses, 5 lines each. Lines 3 and 4 of verse 1 (Refrain) repeat in verses 2 and 3. The syllable count for each stanza is 9, 7, 5, 3, 1 and has an aaAAb rhyme scheme.
8 responses to “Thursday photo prompt – Scattered #writephoto”
I loved the scattered screams I wish those words were mine. A Good job was done
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thank you, Ellen 🙂
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Nicely done. 🌹🌼
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Unusual form with repetition and challenging constraints. I liked the scattered and awkward refrain.
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thank you, Frank 🙂
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wonderful!
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many thanks 🙂
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