– Marta Bevacqua

She felt being in a quagmire

Or being stuck in a dryer

So inexperienced and unripe

Out of her shell!

Hoping her longing she could quell

Hope to get out of labyrinth

She felt being in a quagmire

Out of her shell!

One day she could get out of here

One day she could be free again

One day she could be strong, too

Out of her shell!*

(c) ladyleemanila 2021

BaccresiezéStanzaic, written in 3 quatrains.
Syllabic, L1,L2,L3 are 8 syllables and L4 is 4 syllables.
refrained,
rhymed, with a complicated rhyme scheme AaxB bxAB xxxB x being unrhymed.

For: #TANKATUESDAY WEEKLY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 234, #SYNONYMSONLY | 🍃Word Craft: Prose & Poetry🍃 (wordcraftpoetry.com), Photo Challenge #374 | Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie (wordpress.com)

7 responses to “#TANKATUESDAY WEEKLY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 234, #SYNONYMSONLY – Green & Morass”

  1. This is brilliant, Lady Lee! I opened up the challenge to all syllabic forms, thinking of you and several others who I knew would enjoy writing more poetry. ❤

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    1. thanks for thinking of me, Colleen 🙂 I do enjoy doing this challenge ❤

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      1. You’re welcome. Now, you can have fun every week. ❤

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  2. Good one!

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    1. thank you, Vignesh 🙂

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      1. Welcome 🙂

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