A Ghazal is a poem that is made up like an odd numbered chain of couplets, where each couplet is an independent poem. It should be natural to put a comma at the end of the first line. The Ghazal has a refrain of one to three words that repeat, and an inline rhyme that preceedes the refrain. Lines 1 and 2, then every second line, has this refrain and inline rhyme, and the last couplet should refer to the authors pen-name… The rhyming scheme is AA bA cA dA eA etc.
Without a word, we waited at the scene
On a covered moon, tonight at the scene
Farther along we heard a flute playing
The man on top of his roof at the scene
She sensed an invisible him by her side
He’s gone since he was sixteen, what a scene
The eclipse of the moon on a clear night
The couple waltzed along, romantic scene
He stood there, smiled and looked into my eyes
For Ladylee, the best thing at the scene
(c) ladyleemanila 2017
For: #AtoZChallenge – 4-8-2017 – Letter G , Saturday Mix – April 8, 2017, the second week of NaPoWriMo
Lovely Ghazal I do so love this form … happy writing for NaPoWritMo!
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thanks, Bastet 🙂 have a lovely day!
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Well done! An excellent response to the image and a new form of poetry for me.
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thank you, Lorraine 🙂
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Great week of posts, look forward to more next week 🙂
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thanks, Iain 🙂 enjoy your weekend!
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Don’t you love it when you are the best there is…well done..
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hehehe cheers, Michael 🙂
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