so immature, I knew he would be trouble

from the moment we met like a trap

I was out of breath in a light frap

rising and falling in a bubble

nothing left but bricks and rubble

forgetting the promise he made, that chap

so immature, I knew he would be trouble

from the moment we met like a trap

got no choice, he makes me chuckle

he beckons me and I’m there in a snap

with his charming smile and blue cap

we kiss and I feel his little stubble

so immature, I knew he would be trouble

(c) ladyleemanila 2023

For: https://carrotranch.com/2023/08/01/august-1-story-challenge-in-99-words-2/

5 responses to “August 1: Story Challenge in 99-words – Immature”

  1. Well done to write in rhyme with words 99.
    And to capture the charms of the immature.

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