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so immature, I knew he would be trouble
from the moment we met like a trap
I was out of breath in a light frap
rising and falling in a bubble
nothing left but bricks and rubble
forgetting the promise he made, that chap
so immature, I knew he would be trouble
from the moment we met like a trap
got no choice, he makes me chuckle
he beckons me and I’m there in a snap
with his charming smile and blue cap
we kiss and I feel his little stubble
so immature, I knew he would be trouble
(c) ladyleemanila 2023
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5 responses to “August 1: Story Challenge in 99-words – Immature”
Well done to write in rhyme with words 99.
And to capture the charms of the immature.
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